'The Ruin Marble', a short instrumental piece

skullfunkerry

Had this in my head for a while and finally got it down the other day. Drums are a downloaded loop from looperman.com and everything else is my THR5 straight into Reaper. I say 'everything else', it's a bass and two guitars... Brian Eno I'm not!

spark240

Mmmmm.....its different...and can't hear the Bass at all...just a sea of guitars Im afraid...

skullfunkerry

spark240 said:

Mmmmm.....its different...and can't hear the Bass at all...just a sea of guitars Im afraid...

There's not a lot of bass, to be fair... the drum loop already had some in, so I added a little bit more. I'm very new to mixing, so all comments are a help. Cheers!

spark240

What DAW you using?

skullfunkerry

spark240 said:

What DAW you using?

Reaper

Bezzer

I like it. I can hear the bass but yeah it’s not leaping out by any means. 
I think if you pull back the rhythm guitars to be more balanced with the loop you be on a winner. Take a view on the lead parts after that but my suspicion is they need to come back to.
cool little piece though.