new track from pal of mine

Snap

This is what I think is a cracking track recorded by a friend of mine. I think its great.

Snap

i forgot to mention that I contirbuted a bit: guitars and bass, but under strict orders as to vibe etc, and all the writing and recording etc is done by Al.

MatthewShreddery

That's bloody excellent! 

spark240

Odd genre for me...but it ok...

From a production view It lacked some low end on my HS7 monitors....I was sort of waiting for the Bass to kick in?

frank1985

it's pretty good....I would suggest instead of playing out the chorus for so long towards the end, break it up with a guitar solo, or catchy riff, then resume the chorus after, only with more intensity.