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Band Stuff: https://navigationofficial.bandcamp.com/album/silhouette-ep
And definitely feature pretty girls in the band more than middle aged men!
Ok I made a video, what do you reckon?
I would order the songs in terms of popularity ie. Pink's biggest hit / most well-known first then second etc. I've never heard the second song on there.
The vocals in the first song are not 'quite' as good as some of the others IMO, but the first song is the most important to the listener. People have short attention spans, so might only watch the first 30 seconds, so you've got to hit them hard with the hits and the most impressive singing first. I can understand you choosing to put that outfit first though!
In this day and age, most people will watch this video on their phones. The text and labels need to be bigger and clearer for that format, especially your 'call to action' which is your Facebook page. Is this where you want people to go to contact you? Maybe make the text white, as the background is predominantly dark throughout the video. Maybe have it extra large at the end too.
But that's all fine-tuning and feel free to ignore my blathering. Like someone said above, it does a great job at showing you off as a professional, talented, entertaining band. Job done.
Having watched it on my phone I'd echo what @Lebarque suggested re the text and logos. I also wonder if it could be shorter. In this day and age 5 min videos are often ignored as they're outwith people's ever decreasing attention spans. I felt that I'd seen enough by 3 mins (as in I didn't need to see any more to convince me to book you)