So, I'm usually a bit afraid of putting up my own stuff for fear of the inevitable general indifference I'll receive. I don't have the same fear with my band's music because there's 4 of us, we exist, we play gigs, all is well. With my own stuff, it's just me with a little bucket of sounds that no one has any reason to care about
Nonetheless, I suppose it has to happen some time. I've got tunes, 12 of the buggers, and I've spent long enough on them that I feel I must inflict them on you. This is one, it's mostly mixed barring minor tweaks that'll come to me while I'm finishing the other tracks I'm sure.
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I would say though, as a( now retired producer who listens for songs rather than technically listens ) that to make these songs more palatable to the causal listener things would have to get less busy with more emphasis on the vocal and less busy little parts competing for the space.
I think what you have done is produce something you like and like minded people on here and around the world would like too but If you did want more mainstream appeal then I think there's better songs under the clutter. In short I think you have gilded the lilly
If you have any specific advice relating to this track, like "get rid of the guitar at 2:30" etc, please feel welcome to give it!
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Well done though .. I liked the guitar mayhem at around 3:30 ...
Remember, it's easier to criticise than create!
But it's your music so do what you like. I enjoy 'busy' stuff FWIW so I think it's fine for my own tastes
My favourite bit was I especially loved the chords & guitar tone at 2.54
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You might regret saying that in a month or so. Thanks though!
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Great track though...;-)....Oh and Im near Bham ....just sayin.
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