I wrote a new ditty.... [now with basslines!]

Skipped

Sounds good.

Don't ever sell that guitar.

Drew_TNBD

Skipped said:

Sounds good.

Don't ever sell that guitar.

Not planning on it! In fact I think I wanna get another!

Jalapeno

You really got that Clutch vibe nailed !  :P



Loved it, the drones, and the little arpeggios that sounded like piano sprinkles - superb. Vocals were ok, either process them of give it some more welly is a good suggestion ^^^^^

You could get right up close to the mic and faux whisper/mumble them, with the spooky opening it would really set an atmosphere.

Bloody excellent work though !  

Drew_TNBD

Jalapeno said:

You really got that Clutch vibe nailed !  :P

hehehehehe.

Loved it, the drones, and the little arpeggios that sounded like piano sprinkles - superb. Vocals were ok, either process them of give it some more welly is a good suggestion ^^^^^

You could get right up close to the mic and faux whisper/mumble them, with the spooky opening it would really set an atmosphere.

Bloody excellent work though !  

I'm definitely going more for the faux whisper/mumble stuff. Giving it some proper welly isn't really a good idea for those versey parts, but the chorus certainly. I'm already giving it some for that though tbh! It might be the mix is kind of hiding the effort that I put into it. lol.

Cheers Jal!

Wazmeister

Reminds me of a Praise n Worship band I heard once...

Drew_TNBD

Wazmeister said:

Reminds me of a Praise n Worship band I heard once...

Oh aye? Which one?

Drew_TNBD

Additions:

- Drums slightly quieter
- Vocals slightly louder
- Added basslines
- Add some vocal harmonies and backing lines

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/630473/Garbage People_roughvocals6.mp3?dl

ourmaninthenorth

Opinions fresh from the peanut gallery: the addition of the harmonies works well, sounds much richer - but I liked the prominence of the   drums in V1, and I think your vocal could stand being a bit louder still without ruining the atmosphere you're creating. Bass is spot on.